Hello
Thank you so much for coming to read my poem.
I had to do a v. v. v long journey recently which, joyously, gave me lots of time for poetry 🙂 As a result I have pawed a garland cinquain in response to Colleen’s weekly poetry challenge. The prompt words this week – to be used synonymously – are: congregate and passion.
This is what a cinquain is all about.
A garland cinequi is a sequence of five stand alone cinquains with a sixth one that takes a line, in sequence, from each of the preceding five.
I have done my jolly best to stick to all the rules. Admittedly, line 3 of cinequi 4 doesn’t have obvious verbs but, if you had ever seen us dogs go, you would know we are the very personification of doing words 😎
I got a little carried away, with the whole thing of picking lines from preceding cinquains to make a new one thing, so… using my big Border Collie brains, I played around a bit – see no. 5. What larks 🙂
Morning
Forest beckons
Our people gathering
Excitement heralding the day
Walking
Chestnuts
Green canopy
Filtering sunlit paths
Canine playground, ecstatic dogs
Chasing
Mary
Derek, Stewart,
Meeting – David, Trevor
Talking about the president
Raging
Benzie,
Maisie, Toby,
Amber, Sam and Chuckles
Convene the doggy parliament
Zealous
Morning
Walking Chestnuts
Chasing Mary raging
Benzie zealous in protection
Barking
Morning
Green Canopy
Meeting – David, Trevor
Convene the doggy parliament
Barking
By Ben, the dog poet © 2018
That was hard work, must sleep.
Love Ben xx
Dearest Ben,
That must have been a bit of a stretch, even for a clever border collie like you. Well done!
Much love,
David
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Thank you David, though I’m never going to equal your dog dreams poem.
Love Ben xx
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OMG! I loved the title and the garland cinquain, Bernadette. What fun. That Ben cracks me up. Give him a good cuddle from me. Your creativity knows no bounds! ❤
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Thank you so much Colleen. I’m sure you can imagine how much fun I had writing it. Ben has had his cuddle and is settled for sleep dreaming of our special friend in Denver. ❤
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Oh, Bernadette. You’ve made my day. I’m sending many hugs and love to you both. ❤
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And our love to you ❤❤
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What lovely verses, you’ve left me smiling, Ben…you’re a wonderful doggie and poet!
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Oh my tummy has gone all warm. Thank you so much, what accolades 🙂
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It’s a pleasure!
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Hi, Ben! I love, love, love this poem! It must have been quite a challenge to come up with this Garland Cinquain. Good for you! 😀 xx
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Hi Vashti,
Oh thank you so much. I am brimming with pride. I hadn’t come across this form before joining in Colleen’s weekly challenge. Isn’t it brilliant. Being a dog, I thought I was only going to manage those 3 line Haikus (nothing wrong with that) but, hey ho, what larks. Love Ben xx
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Oh thanks so much. I’m so pleased I made you smile. We all need to do that don’t we. I’m so excited about being poet of the week xx
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Well done. You should be proud. 🙂
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Congratulations!
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Wow, what a lovely garland cinquain, I can see that it’s hard work and needs a rest. Well done!
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Oh thank you Miriam, I so enjoy doing the challenges.
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So do I – I usually read the prompt, let it sink into my thought and see where it take me. I have tried the Garland Cinquain yet.
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